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What Every First Draft Must Have

4/19/2013

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When I first began writing, it was because there were stories dancing around in my head that just had to come out. I'd sit down at my keyboard and peck away for hours to put the world, the characters, the story onto the page, so they would no longer occupy my every thought.  Writing for me was very much a form of expression. And most of my stories were well received, though every now and again I'd write a story that flopped. And I couldn't figure out why. What was even worse was no one else could explain either.

Then I began to study craft. I learned all the little rules that every writer should know.  What I like to call The Laws. Read endlessly about filter verbs and character arcs and third person limited. And that knowledge helped me write even better stories and fix mistakes in others I'd recently written.  But I had this one story that was unfixable.

The characters were awesome. The setting was interesting. There was romance, adventure, fight scenes, so why did it blow monkey balls? The answer is...it had no plot.

Plot is the one thing I've found that can't be added later. A rewrite to add plot means you get an entirely new story. And that's what kept happening. I wasn't fixing that story, I was coming up with new ones based off the world of that story.

A friend once compared a plotless story to an animal with no skeleton, and he was so right. I was trying to reshape a massive blob into a living thing and it just wasn't going to happen.

So now, I make sure everything I write has a plot.  And the way I do it is by using the Three Act Structure (which has four parts, so it's really poorly named).

Act 1: Why is this shit happening to me?

Act 2a: I really want this shit to stop happening to me. (25%)

Act 2b: Okay, I'm going to stop this shit from happening to me. (50%)

Act 3: Take that jerks! (75%)

Some people think that using a story structure limits creativity, but I feel the opposite. Once I know that no matter what I do, I'll have a viable story, I can fly free and delve deep into each scene knowing that it will make the whole even greater. And I don't end up with 30 pages fit only for my fireplace.

So what story structure do you use or do you prefer to just wing it?
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ED Martin link
4/21/2013 09:36:26 am

When it comes to short stories, I generally just wing it. But I can't even do that unless I have that structured plot in mind, or at least the first two acts (often the ending changes while I'm writing, as the story forms and evolves). Sometimes, like you, I come up with great premises. A real Nigerian prince using an online dating service. A demon traveling around harvesting souls. But no plot, and so I've learned to just let those ideas float around my head until a plot attaches.

As for novels, I develop a rough outline before I begin. It's too easy for those to wander with great characters and settings and subplots and never move the main plot forward - basically, to devolve into that giant blob you described.

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J. Rose Allister link
4/26/2013 05:40:11 am

Nice! It's funny, but I hear so often from authors how they got started first because they just wanted to dive in and write stories. And I feel like such a non-conformist because when I wondered what it would be like to write fiction, I went out and logically, methodically, and thoroughly studied craft before I dared set pen to paper. A very left brain approach to a right brain pursuit. LOL

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